Talk:British nuclear testing in the United States/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:41, 4 November 2018 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:41, 4 November 2018 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links mostly OK
• This link didn't work for me: Agreement between the Government of the United States of America and the Government of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland for Cooperation on the uses of Atomic Energy for Mutual Defence Purposes

  Y JBOSS error. Likely a temporary problem, but substituted the US copy of the treaty. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:40, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

• Images properly licensed.
• Link megaton, kiloton, subcritical, primary and secondary fusion on first use

   Done Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:40, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

• Once you've mentioned a year, you needn't mention it again until the next year. 15 May 1963, Clean Slate 1 on 25 May 1963, Clean Slate 2 on 31 May 1963 and Clean Slate 3 on 9 June 1963, forex

  Y Removed repeated years. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:40, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

• new warhead was designed "had to be" designed?

   Done Slight re-wording required. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:40, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

• Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:11, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

• All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:40, 11 November 2018 (UTC)