Talk:British National Party/GA2

GA Review

I'm going to fail this article because of the amount of {{cn}}, {{dead link}} and the formatting of some current references. Please see WP:CITE for how to use references. All web addresses should have the URL, title, author, accessdate and date of any publication. The current referencing looks mish-mash at the moment with the variety of methods used.

But other MOS points that stand out include

• References should be placed after the punctuation per WP:CITE.
• Use of single digit numerals. See WP:MOSNUM.
• Incorrect use of dashes per WP:DASH.
• Incorrect date formats and unnecessary linking of years per WP:DATE.
• Introductory clauses, e.g. In December 2006, ... should include the comma.
• Don't overlink. Nick Griffin is linked eight times.
• The article could do with more images.

I would suggest a peer review before a third GA nomination is made. Peanut4 (talk) 02:29, 23 July 2008 (UTC)