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Citation templates not working at moment, so temp placing here:

 Done--SPhilbrick(Talk) 17:40, 17 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

to do

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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Breanna Stewart/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: EricEnfermero (talk · contribs) 08:58, 25 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I was happy to take a look at this article, but I notice pretty significant issues with prose. Most seriously, I removed a paragraph that appeared to be taken verbatim from the bio on her college team website. In addition to copyediting, the article needs to be thoroughly evaluated for other copyright issues. I will detail a bit more below. EricEnfermero (Talk) 08:58, 25 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The major issues

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It seems that the nominator of this article has been inactive for some time. There are significant issues that won't be easily resolved within a few days, even if someone else were to pick up responsibility for addressing this review feedback. Here are the major issues that I noticed on a brief review; a full review isn't indicated right now.

  • A copyright violation was removed from the Sophomore Year section.
  • The lead is incomplete, with no college info other than the name of her school and that she enrolled in 2012.
  • Grammar is inconsistent - a copyedit may help a great deal. I can provide examples if they would help someone.
  • An inline source should appear after direct quotes.
  • Some 2014-2015 information can probably be included by now.


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

This can be renominated at any point if someone would like to pick it up. EricEnfermero (Talk) 09:21, 25 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Dated photo

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Photo is 5 yrs old, going back to Stewart's high school days... New image needed. Thanks, DA Sonnenfeld (talk) 11:51, 26 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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