Talk:Brazil v Germany (2014 FIFA World Cup)/GA1
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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 16:18, 4 May 2015 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
This seems to be almost without flaws. Just some minor things:
- I'd say the lead is slightly too long. You might wanna consider cutting the last sentence. Maybe the sentence about the referee is also not necessary here?
- You say it is only the second game between Brazil and Germany at a World Cup. There was however a game between the East Germany national football team and Brazil in 1974. You should probably add a sentence about that.
- You should add an inline citation to the Kroos-caption, even though you are giving the reference later in the text.
That's about it. Thank you for a great article about a great game! :) Zwerg Nase (talk) 09:58, 9 May 2015 (UTC)
Cut some of the lead, added a note regarding East Germany and a ref to Kroos. See if anything else is needed. (and how appropriate, a Brazilian nominator - from the state where the game happened! - and a German reviewer) igordebraga ≠ 22:33, 9 May 2015 (UTC)
- It's a pass! Congratulations! This time, you win ;) Zwerg Nase (talk) 01:18, 10 May 2015 (UTC)