Talk:Brawl in Cell Block 99
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[edit]Notice to editors that I am copy editing this article. Other editors are welcome to post questions and comments here. šPacificDepthstalk|contrib 20:20, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
- User:Sinoam What does "It was screened out of competition" mean in the lead section? Can this be re-worded to say the film was screened at the Venice Film Festival? šPacificDepthstalk|contrib 21:33, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
- It means that the film did not participate in the competition at the Venice Film Festival. - ē„儽ļ¼Sinoam(č天) 21:59, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
- "Vaughn and Carpenter were Zahler's first picks for the film's main cast, with Zahler wanting Vaughn in the film to be different from the comedic roles that Vaughn usually plays" - I can't find the source that says the actors were the first pick šPacificDepthstalk|contrib 21:33, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
- "This filming style is similar to Buster Keaton, Fred Astaire, and Jackie Chan, where there is little editing as possible and allowing the actors to play in-person." this seems not relevant to the Casting section šPacificDepthstalk|contrib 07:43, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
I made some edits which I think make the article read better. Please leave feedback and comments here. šPacificDepthstalk|contrib 02:37, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the copy-editing. It was sorely needed to be re-nominated for GA. ē„儽ļ¼Sinoam(č天) 22:00, 21 November 2022 (UTC)