Talk:Bras Basah MRT station/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:13, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

What is CC2 at the head of the infobox?
- The station code--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - I asked because it's not explained or referenced. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 07:01, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    - Well it is used on official maps. See here. Should I have put it in the lead, or just left in the infobox (btw we have just removed station codes from the lead, I'm afraid.)--ZKang123 (talk) 12:47, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      - It needs to be somewhere in the article other than just unexplained in the infobox. And referenced, of course. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 14:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
        All right, added in the station details services section.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:53, 22 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
What's WOHA?
- WOHA seems to be the name itself, in capital letters. See official website--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"in Museum planning area" in the Museum Planning Area.
- Fixed
SOTA is defined but never used.
- Fixed Removed abbreviation--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Consider linking "interchange" for non-experts.
- Fixed Linked--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Marina Line" - capital L here for some reason, and does this actually exist?
- Yes it did, but later merged into the Circle line. Check this book page 36.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - "Marina Line Architectural Design Competition" capitalises Line again. Be consistent. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 07:02, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
World Architecture Festival has an article.
- Fixed
"The Contract 825 ..." no need for The here.
- Fixed
Image captions which aren't complete sentences should not have a full stop.
- Fixed
"S$343.94 million " could this be converted to something more common, e.g. US$ or Euro?
- Fixed used USD--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"The contract also includes " included.
- Fixed used USD--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
" on 10 June 2002.[4] On 15 March 2003," repetitive prose.
- Fixed
"The station opened ..." avoid single-sentence paras.
- Fixed
Infobox, what's referencing the postal address?
- Fixed used street directory and yoursingaporemap.com
Infobox, what's DT21?
- Station code for Bencoolen. Removed code as it's not necessary.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox, bus and taxi don't need to be capitalised.
- Fixed
' 42 metres (138 ft)),[10" spare closing parenthesis there
- Fixed
the "deepest" and "longest escalator" records need context, i.e. deepest in the MRT?
- Fixed
' allows improvement in ' -> improves.
- Fixed
"he ventilation shafts of the station also blended" replace "also" with "are".
- Fixed Used active instead of passive (blends into)--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"of view lines across" are "view lines" the same as "views"?
- Fixed Rephrased to "avoiding obstruction of the view across the site to the surrounding civic buildings"--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"civic buildings.[13][11]" ref order.
What is AIA?
- Fixed American Institute of Architects--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"as part of the Art-in-Transit programme at the station" was this programme MRT-wide or just at this single station?
- Fixed MRT-wide.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"The video also (re-)visits..." this whole sentence reads like a copy/paste from a travel blog.
- Eh well, I lifted it from the description.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:45, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - If it's a quote, put it in quote marks. Otherwise it needs re-writing as it's not encyclopedic in tone. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 07:03, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    - Done
Avoid SHOUTING in the refs.
- Fixed
numerical ranges in ref titles should be en-dash.
- Fixed

That's all I have on a first pass. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:13, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"glass roof, which is the key feature of the station." glass isn't mentioned anywhere other than in this image caption, so if it's a "key feature" then I would expect it to be covered in the article too. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 07:04, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed Changed glass roof to the reflective pool that's above the escalators. My oversight--ZKang123 (talk) 12:47, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Still some SHOUTING in the refs.
- Fixed
What's LTA?
- Fixed Land Transport Authority--ZKang123 (talk) 23:29, 22 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 12 needs an accessdate.
- Done added date.--ZKang123 (talk) 23:29, 22 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 20:07, 22 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: are there other outstanding issues needed to be fixed?--ZKang123 (talk) 07:20, 28 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, happy with the changes so promoting to GA, good work. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 08:10, 31 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks!--ZKang123 (talk) 08:12, 31 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]