Talk:Brad Hand/GA1

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 14:45, 12 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:45, 12 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sources are all reliable, and the images are all appropriately licensed.

"In his only appearance for Jacksonville": I think would be better as "In his only appearance for Jacksonville that season", since he played for them in 2011.
"he did not make the Miami Marlins'[a] 2012 Opening Day roster, instead assigned to Jacksonville on March 18": missing a word? Seems like it should be "and was instead assigned".

These are both minor points; the article is in good shape, and I'm going to pass this for GA without waiting for fixes. Looks good. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:40, 12 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Mike Christie Because Legobot was not working when this review was picked up, I didn't see these comments yet. As the article already passed, not a major time-sensitive point, but I did still want to let you know that I addressed both prose issues. — Ghost River 16:18, 13 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hadn't realized Legobot didn't notify you -- I'll have to check the other GAs I started a review on around that time, so thanks for mentioning that. Your fixes look good. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 17:23, 13 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]