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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:52, 16 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • "to unlike" → "too unlike"
  • "in order to" → "to" (less wordy)
  • "schoolgame" should be written as two words.
  • Add a comma after the first use of "Additionally".
  • Remove the comma after "in the chorus".
  • "kids choir" → "kids' choir" or "childrens' choir" (both times)
  • Add a comma after "the first verse".
  • "have have" - typo?
  • Remove the hyphen between "amp-up".
  • "mix crafted remix" - reword
  • as "lushly orchestrated ballad" → as a "lushly orchestrated ballad"
  • "songs is" → "song is"
  • Sort categories in alphabetical order.
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:23, 16 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]