Talk:Boy (I Need You)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:50, 14 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Non-reviewer comment – That background section is the perfect example of WP:UNDUE and needs pruning. If any other help is needed let me know. Would love to help around although I'm getting the hang of it. :) —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 12:13, 21 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Please, any help is great. :) - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 00:19, 23 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

the singer decided release to "Boy (I Need You)" instead. → Remove the "to", it makes no sense.
I changed it to "the singer decided to release" instead. Take a look. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Background

I have no problem with this, I like to actually read proper background and much of what led up to Charmbracelet was created influenced by what happened over the two years previous.

Release and composition

I wouldn't actually call this composition, as there is no composition info. It is more about recording.
Retitled to "Recording and release". - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

Order it from positive to negative reviews instead of having positive then negative then positive
Take a look. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Music video and live performances

recoding → recording
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Didn't she perform the song on Graham Norton?
- Added - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

US R&B Airplay shouldn't be included as it charted on the main R&B chart. See WP:USCHARTS
Removed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

References

A lot of the work/publisher fields are not linked the first time, such as Fox, USA Today and MTV
Take a look and see if everything's fixed. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Status

On hold for 7 days. Hardly anything to fault here. — AARON • ^TALK 16:47, 1 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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