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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 (talk · contribs) 13:15, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I will have a look at this shortly.

Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:43, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Okay. (Wow you were quick, I'm still conducting the review!) REDMAN 2019 (talk) 15:48, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
REDMAN 2019, Yup, I get around! :p ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:50, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Description

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  • Link Honolulu.
Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:44, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

History

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Subsequent locations

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  • "Camden and Poppe had applied for a liquor license for the restaurant by November 2015, and were joined by new co-owner Matt Lynch." Ref needed.
  • "The trio opened a fourth location along East Burnside Street on December 1, 2017, slightly later than a previously announced opening date of October 15." Ref gives the planned opening date but not when it actually opened. Might be worth moving ref 20 to there and creating a second mention where it currently is.
    • If you insist on having a citation immediately after December 1, 2017, I'll add one, but don't the citations throughout the paragraph support the December 1 claim? I'd say the claim is easily verifiable based on surrounding context and citations, but again, if you insist, I can add. ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:50, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In addition to Camden, Poppe, and Lynch, Chris Thornton has been named a co-owner of Boxer Ramen"> In addition to Camden, Poppe, and Lynch, Chris Thornton was named a co-owner of Boxer Ramen in 2020.

Comments

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I was going to put this on hold. But as you came along and cleaned it up quickly I am able to pass this. It is well written and well sourced and meets GA criteria in my opinion. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 16:01, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

REDMAN 2019, Thank you! ---Another Believer (Talk) 16:03, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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