Talk:Bound High!/GA1
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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 13:33, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
I've always been fascinated with anything related to Virtual Boy, so I'll give this a look. Namcokid47 (talk) 13:33, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
Sorry it took longer than expected, I wanted to finish up Space Invaders Virtual Collection before I did anything else.
Lead
[edit]- "Despite being showcased on various trading shows and completed for release" should be changed to "Despite being showcased at various trade shows and completed for release".
- Fixed.
Gameplay
[edit]- "players" should be just "player" as this is a single-player game.
- I use "players" in my writing to refer less to multi-player and more to refer to the people who may play the same. I think it's more of a stylistic choice than anything.
History
[edit]- The last two sentences in the second paragraph should be connected , ie "both the United States and Japan, however it was left unreleased". Should also change it to "was never released" as I think it flows better.
- Fixed.
Reception
[edit]- Nintendo Power should be linked.
- Fixed.
References
[edit]- Some of the sources are inconsistent with how the dates are formatted, which needs to be fixed.
Namcokid47 (talk) 04:13, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
- Fixed.
If this is all of the issues I believe I've fixed everything @Namcokid47:. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 04:27, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
- I think everything looks good, I've now promoted it. Great work! Namcokid47 (talk) 04:30, 14 September 2019 (UTC)