Talk:Bound (Fringe)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:41, 3 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lede: Any notable guest stars?
Lede: Can you expand a little more on the plot? It's only one tiny sentence.
Plot: "the previous episode" -> "the previous episode, 'Safe'" Just so we know what's what
Production: Add a citation after every direct quotes, such as "creepy and weird"
Production: "out — it" -> "out—it" only use spaces with an endash, not an emdash.
Production: "We had so much fun!" "That's probably my favorite sequence in the show thus far." There's two quotations back to back. Either combine them, or add a transition sentence
Reception: The IGN review is just a bit chunk of paragraph. Maybe paraphrase some of it and cut it up
Also, expand upon the Jack Bauer part and make sure you explain who he is and what show he's a part of
References: The Fearnet link appears to be down
References: 17, 18, and 19 don't have either a work or a publisher; 17 should be Gold Derby, 18 and 19 should be Academy of Television Arts & Sciences
Categories should be in alphabetical order

That's really all I got. The images seem good and the prose reads great. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Thanks, as always, for reviewing! Ruby 2010/2013 04:12, 5 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed the dead link issue, but other than that, all good. I pass.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:23, 5 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Oh oops. I thought you meant the other Fearnet link (which I removed). Thanks for fixing! Ruby 2010/2013 04:41, 5 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]