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Passed. ZKang123 (talk) 06:05, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 01:37, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Will also check this out.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:37, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Early checks

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  • Earwig shows no problems.
  • Images are free-use.
  • The W train is mentioned in the lead but the bullet is not in the infobox. I guess limited services aren't supposed to be in the infobox?
    • That is correct. The top of the infobox is intended for daytime services, which correspond to the services that appear on the entrances, e.g. this image which only shows the 2, 3, 4, 5, and R. The N and W are listed further down in the infobox (along with the times when they serve the station), but since they don't typically stop here, they aren't listed at the top of the infobox. Epicgenius (talk) 15:50, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Lead comments:
    • "The station opened on January 9, 1908, as part of an extension of the original IRT into Brooklyn." – "The station opened on January 9, 1908, when the original IRT extended into Brooklyn."
    • Done. Epicgenius (talk) 15:50, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    • "The Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line station under Brooklyn Borough Hall also has two side platforms and two tracks, but with the platforms on different levels." – "The Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line station under Brooklyn Borough Hall also has two side platforms and two tracks on different levels."
    • Done. Epicgenius (talk) 15:50, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

First subway

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  • " was nearly completed, except for the entrances." – remove the comma
  • "Construction began at State Street in Manhattan on November 8, 1902.[6]: 162–191  Construction of the Joralemon Street Tunnel began in 1903.[11] " – sentence structure is a little repetitive here
  • "as the terminal for the extension" – shouldn't it be terminus? Or is it an American English thing?
  • "in early 1909, celebrating the fact that it was Brooklyn's first underground subway station." – "in early 1909 to celebrate that it was Brooklyn's first underground subway station."
    • I also find this repetitive. Maybe you can move the fact at "Borough Hall was the first underground subway station in Brooklyn;"
      • Although I realize this is repetitive, the plaques were installed specifically because Borough Hall was Brooklyn's first underground subway station, rather than because of anything else. Epicgenius (talk) 15:50, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

More to come.--ZKang123 (talk) 14:06, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Dual contracts

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  • "The line's Borough Hall station was designed as a two-level station" – was designed might be unnecessary. "The line's Borough Hall station was a two-level station"
  • "was to be excavated" – remove "to be"
  • "There were to be entrances on Fulton Street (now Cadman Plaza West[42][a]) at Montague Street and at Myrtle Avenue."
    • I guess the entrances were to be along Fulton Street, at the junction with Montague Street and at Myrtle Avenue?
      • These are, or were, two separate intersections. The intersection of Fulton Street and Myrtle Avenue as slightly north of the intersection of Fulton Street and Montague Street. The portion of Myrtle Avenue connecting with Fulton Street/Cadman Plaza West no longer exists. Epicgenius (talk) 15:50, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    • Also rewrite "There were to be entrances on Fulton Street" – "Entrances were planned along Fulton Street"
  • " the tracks for the Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line had been completed" – "were completed"
  • "In 1920, a project to construct a new entrance" – rewrite to "In 1920, a new entrance".
  • "Because of the depth of the station, elevators were to ascend to Clinton Street at its western end." – "Due to the station's depth, elevators were designed to go up to Clinton Street at its western end."
  • "The eastern end was to contain stairs and escalators to Court Street itself, as well as to the IRT Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line station." – "The eastern end was equipped with staircases and escalators leading (directly) to Court Street and the IRT Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line station."

Later modifications

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2000s to present

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  • "The ceiling was over 100 years old, and its collapse necessitated $8.3 million in emergency repairs" – "The collapse of the 100-year-old ceiling necessitated $8.3 million in emergency repairs."
  • "in need of renovation." – "requiring renovation"
  • "In November 2022, the MTA announced that it would award a $106 million contract for the installation of additional elevators at the Borough Hall station complex, making the Eastern Parkway Line platforms fully accessible" – "In November 2022, the MTA announced that it would award a $106 million contract for the installation of additional elevators at the station complex. This initiative aims for the Eastern Parkway Line platforms to be fully accessible."
  • "As of March 2023, work was scheduled to begin in mid-2023 and be completed in 2025."– "As of March 2023, work was scheduled to begin in the middle of that year with a scheduled completion date of 2025."

Station layout

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  • "The IRT Eastern Parkway Line station, containing two tracks and two side platforms, runs east–west under Joralemon Street." – Reword to "The IRT Eastern Parkway Line station has two tracks and two side platforms and run east–west under Joralemon Street." Reword similarly for the two other sentences.
  • "not accessible." – "not ADA-accessible"
  • "There are three overpasses of the Eastern Parkway Line platforms at the mezzanine level above the center of that station." – "At the mezzanine level are three overpasses of the Eastern Parkway Line platforms above the center of that station."
  • Is there a photo of the mosaic of the Eastern Parkway Line station? I saw one for the Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line platforms.
  • "The Fourth Avenue Line platform is the deepest in the complex, under both sets of IRT platforms." – is there a depth mentioned in the source?
  • Turn the gallery section in the exits subsection using the multiple images template

IRT Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line platforms

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  • The mosaic name tablet kind of sandwiches the text too much. I suggest you could move it up to the history section.
  • "There is a side platform southwest of each track; northbound trains use the upper level while southbound trains use the lower one." – "Southwest of each track is a side platform; northbound trains use the upper level while southbound trains use the lower one."
  • "Both tracks become the local tracks for the line." – "Both become local tracks for the line."
  • "but was not used until the Clark Street Tunnel opened." – "but was not used until the opening of Clark Street Tunnel."
  • I think you don't need to separate the design paragraph into another subsection.

IRT Eastern Parkway Line platforms

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  • "Between Borough Hall and Hoyt Street, there was originally a set of switches connecting the express tracks to the local tracks." – "Originally, a set of switches between Borough Hall and Hoyt Street connect the express tracks to the local tracks."
  • "The switches have since been removed" – any reason why, and when?
    • I cannot confirm this, but I remember reading that these switches were removed in the 1970s or 1980s. This was probably to simplify operations, as there was another switch just two stops east (at Nevins Street), but this meant express trains could no longer serve Hoyt Street. Epicgenius (talk) 15:02, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

BMT Fourth Avenue Line platform

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Final thoughts

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  • I note the previous articles I've reviewed (14th Street Union Square and Fulton Street) mention about the passenger numbers, but this doesn't. Nevertheless, I can understand since this is the 28th, it's not worthy of mention.
    • I could look for some passenger stats. Union Square and Fulton Street were respectively the 4th and 5th busiest stations in the system in 2019, the last year of normal passenger numbers, but Borough Hall/Court Street did use to be one of the busiest stations in Brooklyn. Epicgenius (talk) 15:02, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm personally unsure if the surface connections section is relevant. Though I would have talked about what the station serves and notable landmarks.


Putting article on hold while issues above are being addressed.--ZKang123 (talk) 11:37, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Above issues addressed satisfactorily.--ZKang123 (talk) 06:05, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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