Talk:Bondiola sandwich/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:09, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I plan to review this tonight. ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 00:09, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All done! Note this is my first food-related review, so apologies in advance for any obvious errors. On a side note, I am now incredibly hungry… Anyways, I have placed this article on hold for now and left some comments below. Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns, otherwise I may not respond. Thanks, ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 01:18, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work! I am now pleased to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 17:20, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check

Earwig says good to go.

Files

All images used are relevant, of good quality and copyright-free:

File:Bondiola Sandwich with fixings.jpg: CC-BY-SA 2.0;

File:Bondiola.jpg: CC-BY-SA 2.0.

Prose

DoneIn the infobox, capitalise lemon juice.
DoneI would perhaps wikilink sandwich in this context as it seems relevant to the overall article.
Is "History" the right name for the section? I am so used to writing articles in this way but I can change it. Bruxton (talk) 01:39, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
- Well, the text does not appear to actually be related to history. Unfortunately as I am unfamiliar with articles related to cuisine I am not entirely sure what to call it. Any ideas?

I see that Grilled cheese, uses history, Submarine sandwich uses History and etymology, Cheesesteak uses history. Many sandwich articles are stubs so they have no sections.Bruxton (talk) 16:19, 21 February 2023 (UTC)

Oh, I see! My bad then.

DoneShould Choripán and Parrilla be capitalised?
DoneRecommend combining the sentence starting "It now rivals the Choripán" with the sentence about its commonness in Buenos Aires restaurants as they seem closely related, and the former sentence feels out of place where it is right now.
DoneWikilink brioche in Description.
Done"it is called (Bondiola di Treviso)." – no need for the parentheses here.
DoneI am sure you have researched extensively, but as the article is on the shorter I do have to ask: is there anything else in RS sources that could perhaps be added? I was pretty thorough but I will see if I missed anything. Bruxton (talk) 01:39, 21 February 2023 (UTC)

Refs

Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 1, 3, 4, 6 or 7.

DoneRemove Ph.D. from ref 1; post-nominals are not included in citations.
DoneAre publication dates available for refs 4–5 and 7–9?
Done Ref 6 appears to have the wrong publication name; I believe it should be La Nacion.
DoneRef 8 looks unreliable as a blog. removed

Other

Short desc, See also, navbox and cats look good.

DoneRecommend adding template:use dmy dates.
DoneRecommend adding template:use X English.
DoneThe YouTube URL seems unnecessary. removed and moved the commons to last section per MOS:ORDER Bruxton (talk) 02:24, 21 February 2023 (UTC)

LunaEatsTunaI have made the changes. Thanks for a speedy review. Bruxton (talk) 02:26, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lucky for you Agriculture, food and drink is the highest GA category alphabetically :) ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 03:04, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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