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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 21:32, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Lead

  • "He batted and threw right-handed. Unglaub stood 5 feet 11 inches (1.80 m) and weighed 178 pounds (81 kg)." — Doesn't appear in body of article.
  • "Though he got the starts" — Odd wording.

Early life

Early seasons (1901–03)

  • Where did the Meriden Silverites play? What year did he sign with them?
  • Where did Worcester play? Massachusetts?
  • "also played the 1901 season" — Does this mean he played in Worcester in both 1900 and 1901, or that he played in both Meriden and Worcester in 1901?
  • Any other relevant stats from this period?

First taste of the major leagues (1904–05)

  • What does "unknown transaction" mean?
  • "an earlier trade" — Link to player to be named later, or is that too recent a concept?
  • "The only two he played to completion were doubleheaders." — "part of the same doubleheader"?
  • "a pitching duel at first base" — Must have been quite a game, for the pitching duel to be taking place not on the mound but at first base.

Salary dispute (1906–07)

  • "in 1907, the team offered him $4,500 annually" — "annually" seems redundant unless they were offering him a multi-year contract.

Everyday player and manager (1907–08)

Washington Senators (1908–10)

  • "In a 595 game career" — In a 595 major league game career?

Later career (1911–16)

Death

  • "Over the offseason" — Just the 1916 offseason, or generally?

Managerial record

  • Is it convention in articles on baseball players to list only the managerial record, and not the playing stats?