Talk:Bob Noel

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A fact from Bob Noel appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 31 May 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Bob Noel was the one responsible for dealing "with all the dirty laundry" of the Green Bay Packers?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2024/May. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Bob Noel.

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GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:29, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bob Noel/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 22:49, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 22:54, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this tomorrow. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:54, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

I'm wondering if American football is necessary in the first sentence. Maybe American equipment manager? Would get ride of the consecutive linking and add in his ethnicity.
Noel attended Central Catholic High School in Wisconsin and while attending there enlisted in World War II at the age of 18. is a bit choppy. Maybe Noel attended Central Catholic High School in Wisconsin; while still in high school, he enlisted in World War II at the age of 18.?
and a "lot of smaller things" needed by the team for each game --> and a "lot of smaller things" needed for each game
as well as 30 balls for games --> as well as 30 game balls
11 head coaches you could link to List of Green Bay Packers head coaches
I don't know what in the hell I could've done more."[8] and He served the team faithfully and well for a long time."[13] I think the period needs to go after the quotation mark
For the image, you need to do a few things: change the link to be the non-Wikimedia Library link. Also, the copyright holder is the Green Bay Press-Gazette (the image caption notes "Press-Gazette Files". Lastly, add a caption to the infobox, something like "Noel working on a helmet in an undated photo". Also, the image needs to be downsized, which the bot will do at some point.
Spot checks look good. Ref 6, 11 and 14 needs an access date (I typically do them for all citations, but I think you don't; I think thats ok for the Newspaper.com sources, but the others are just live web pages, and thus need access dates).

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:30, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: I believe I've addressed all your points. Thanks, BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:02, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Nice work, passed! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:29, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 15:37, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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