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GA Review

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Reviewer: CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk · contribs) 18:50, 18 November 2019 (UTC)

I will review this soon. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 18:50, 18 November 2019 (UTC)

Article

• Add a short description. Using this format {{short description|HERE}}.

short description is still missing. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 13:32, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

• Fix Dash's per Wikipedia:Manual of Style
• Why is the external link empty?

References

• Begun with some 300 fans,[14][13] the → [13] [14]
• After Sunil Chhetri’s plea, tickets for India game sold out → After Sunil Chhetri's plea, tickets for India game sold out
• London, 1948: India’s first Olympics as an independent nation → London, 1948: India's first Olympics as an independent nation
• Archive all the sources.

You can use this tool here to archive refs. Make sure to click on Add archives to all non-dead references (Optional). ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 13:32, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

• India win Nehru Cup for the thrd time. Ref is not working.
• publisher=The Hindu → work=The Hindu. For all of the refs.
• In references wiki link the publishers.

Ref format

• "World Cup 2018: Sorry, Bengalis. You are not India's greatest football fans". Ref number 2 should have the author and published date.
• "World Cup 2018: Sorry, Bengalis. You are not India's greatest football fans". Ref number 2. Format the publisher it says "Daily O"

Ref Parameters

These references mention below should have the author, published date and correctly formated the publisher's name.

• Fifa World Cup 2018: Which Indian state watches football extravaganza the most?
• Bend it like Bengal: Every four years, the cup comes home
• Kolkata reinstated as the 'Mecca of Indian football
• India win Nehru Cup for the thrd time. Also third is spelled wrong.
• About Us-Introduction to BluePilgrims
• Blue Tigers find support in Blue Pilgrims
• Blue Pilgrims right behind Men in Blues
• List of Blue Pilgrims chants (with lyrics) Part 1 + part 2
• Blue Pilgrims, the 12th man of Indian football
• Intercontinental Cup 2018: 5 Things India gained from the Intercontinental Cup
• Watch: Sunil Chhetri leads incredible Viking clap with Indian fans post Thailand AFC Asian Cup win
• Sunil Chhetri's plea to Indian fans marked as Golden Tweet by Twitter India
• Chhetri called and the Indian football fans answered
• After Sunil Chhetri’s plea, tickets for India game sold out
• Blue Pilgrims plans 3D tifo display for Chhetri and co.

There are too many in the article I suggest modifying each of them.

• The references format is too inconsistent.

• goal.com → Goal
• bluepilgrims.com. → Blue Pilgrims
• sportskeeda.com → Sportskeeda
• stats.the-afc.com → AFC
• redbull.com → Red Bull
• indian-football |website=goal.com |website=goal.com → Remove one website.

Result

 On hold I will take look at the article after these comments have been fixed. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 17:54, 9 December 2019 (UTC)

@CAPTAIN MEDUSA: Fixed. You can have check. But I didn't get which dash is not correct. if you please do it for me. Dey subrata (talk) 01:27, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

@Dey subrata: please see the comments that I have left above. Thanks. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 13:32, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

@CAPTAIN MEDUSA:redbull.com, bluepilgrims.com, goal.com are website based media, and should be kept as website and stats.the-afc.com is their statistical site should not be confused with the-afc.com, so website to be used and work as AFC. So there is no issues of inconsistency with same site concerned. Dey subrata (talk) 13:49, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

Incase of Blue Pilgrims, I'm removing the work=Blue Pilgrim as that become redundant afetr bluepilgrims.com Dey subrata (talk) 13:50, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

Dey subrata, redbull.com is part of Red Bull? ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 13:58, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

@CAPTAIN MEDUSA: I don't get your question... Dey subrata (talk) 14:20, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

Are you asking if its Redbull's website?? then answer is yes. Or are you asking something else..! Dey subrata (talk) 14:22, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

Dey subrata, redbull.com is part of Red Bull. Its official name is "Red Bull" so we must include its official name. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 12:30, 13 December 2019 (UTC)

@CAPTAIN MEDUSA: Yes it is but its not a publisher, its website of Red Bull. Anyway including in work, removing website. Dey subrata (talk) 13:46, 13 December 2019 (UTC)

Dey subrata, please fix the rest of the issues mentioned above. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 12:33, 14 December 2019 (UTC)

@CAPTAIN MEDUSA: All fixed. Added short descrp. and remaining archivng will be done by Gog the Mild, but not a necesssary for GA promotion. Dey subrata (talk) 19:42, 14 December 2019 (UTC)

Promoted. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 09:14, 15 December 2019 (UTC)