Talk:Blood Relatives (Millennium)/GA1
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 17:58, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
Just a few issues:
- Intro: Did the use of the quote received positive acclaim, or the episode?
- Plot: "Black finds the name "Ray Bell" in the same newspaper as the victim's son's obituary, and deduces that the killer may been frequenting funerals before" I think you're missing an 'have' in between may and been
- Plot: "He believes that the victim is his first, but that killing will; become easier for him." I don't follow the use of punctation
- Reception: "finding that its depiction of the character of James Dickerson was added "some shades of gray" to the series' usual "black and white morality"." Remove 'was'
On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:26, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
- Think I've seen to all of these now. Thanks. GRAPPLE X 21:27, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
- Awesome. I pass.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:48, 4 March 2012 (UTC)