Talk:Bleib bei uns, denn es will Abend werden, BWV 6/GA1

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 10:59, 8 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay. Should get to this soon! JAGUAR 10:59, 8 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking this up. You have a few days, I'd like it for DYK on 17 April. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:07, 8 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The lead summarises the article, no issues here
"The reason for the change was possibly the loss of a librettist" - The reason for the change was possibly due to the loss of a librettist
"The poet took verse 29 from the Gospel as a starting point" - this is the Gospel of Luke, just to clarify?
"The librettist chose for the third movement two stanzas from "Ach bleib bei uns, Herr Jesu Christ"" - this could be rearranged to The librettist chose two stanzas from "Ach bleib bei uns, Herr Jesu Christ" for the third movement
"It is characterized by a persistent walking rhythm" - characterised, if you want to stay consistent with spelling

A compact and well written article! I couldn't find any major issues with this as it was smooth throughout. I think it meets the criteria as it is, so I'll pass it outright. I also checked all of the sources and found no issues with verification. Well done JAGUAR 20:37, 8 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]