Talk:Black honeyeater/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jimfbleak (talk • contribs • count) 13:35, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

OK, I'll do this too. Comments to follow Jimfbleak - talk to me? 13:35, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

• female is a speckled grey-brown and immature birds look like the female. — I'd be inclined to replace "and" with a semicolon
• Myzomela — Give the origin of this name since you've done it for nigra
• Previously classified...—is it possible to split this rambling sentence?
• The Black Honeyeater ...They are dependent — changes from singular to plural
• 15 millimetres (0.59 in) eggs — do you have the width of the eggs too?
• Be consistent in your refs, eg

• J.M. Peter and W.K. Steele — other co-authors are surname-initials
• 11040–11045, but 1133–43

Jimfbleak - talk to me? 09:23, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for this feedback, Jimfbleak. These are all done Marj (talk) 19:55, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

I think I'll take a photo of an emu bush, given that these birds are uncharacteristically on a Jacaranda.Marj (talk) 19:55, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

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