Talk:Black and Blue (Better Call Saul)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 07:07, 18 November 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Some of the same issues as other episodes and some light copyediting but almost there. Again, pinging @A person in Georgia and FishandChipper:. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:07, 18 November 2022 (UTC)

• @Sammi Brie:  Done A person in Georgia (talk) 21:31, 18 November 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

• about 80% of the boxing sequence should be "80 percent" per MOS:PERCENT
• Bernstein had been concerned that Odenkirk's training from his action film Nobody would impact his performance but Odenkirk was able to hold back. you want a comma after performance here, as "Odenkirk was able to hold back" is indeed a sentence of its own.
• Albuquerque's former world champion boxer Johnny Tapia the possessive here strikes me as odd
• "doing what every character in 'Black and Blue' is being forced to do: confront their own worst tendencies head-on." another case of MOS:INOROUT fixing

Sourcing and spot checks

Earwig checks out, though I wonder if there's just a tad too much of Greene. I won't ding you for it.

• 3: Used five times, but checks out each time. Y
• 6: I can't check this one out... Is there a timestamp for that video?
• 10: Quotes are reproduced faithfully. Y
• 15: Emmy nomination. Y

Other items

• No image issues.

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