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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:19, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "attempting ... made two attempts..." repetitive.
    • Rephrased
  • "in 1862. In early 1863" likewise.
    • Rephrased
  • Link Union Navy.
    • Linked
  • "less than $9.00 and" no need for the cents, and suggest you inflate this figure (with an appropriate level of precision).
    • Done, and inflated
  • "the Anaconda plan was" plan or Plan?
    • Standardized with Anaconda Plan
  • "still in Confederate hands" still controlled by the Confederates.
    • Done
  • "Thomas General " don't you mean Thomas Williams?
    • Yes, fixed (apparently I slipped up trying to make the piped link)
  • "of ironclads led " link here in the body.
    • Linked
  • "by intentionally grounded" grounding?
    • Corrected to "intentional grounding"
  • "tell Porter.[16][15]" ref order.
    • Swapped
  • "coal barge[19][16] and" similar.
    • Swapped.
  • "either $8.23[19][23] or $8.63[17][24] " inflate.
    • Done
  • "officer Wirt Adams stated" William Wirt Adams.
    • Changed the link, although "Wirt Adams" is probably just as common as "William Wirt Adams"
  • "about a 1 mile" no need for "a".
    • Removed
  • "Indianola occurred in" took place
    • Done
  • Note [a] needs a full stop.
    • Added
  • "Smith, Myron" ref has some odd italic issues.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:49, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]