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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:38, 23 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I'll be taking a look at this! — GhostRiver 16:38, 23 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

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  • Link "girl group"
  • "released on 21 May 2015 through Syco Music"
  • "album, Get Weird (2015)."
  • "received critical acclaim from music critics"
  • "becoming the group's first single to reach number one there" → "the first Little Mix single to do so"
  • "The song remained at number one for three" → "It remained there for three"
  • Comma after "Outside of the United Kingdom"
  • "sixteen additional countries" → "16 additional countries" per MOS:NUMERAL

Background and release

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  • Link first instance of Little Mix in the body
  • "The group said that the new album is "stronger" and will be about relationships and that is also better than their two previous albums, DNA (2012) and Salute (2013)." → "The group said that the new album would be "stronger" and "better" than their two previous albums, DNA (2012) and Salute (2013), and would be about relationships."
  • Link lead single
  • "a "whole new sound" compared to previous material."
  • "they've done" → "they have done" per MOS:CONTRACT
  • "They also said that their album was delayed due to the fact that they wrote a whole album but scrapped it, because" → "Album delays were attributed to the fact that Little Mix's original output was scrapped because"
  • "by tweeting" → "when she tweeted"
  • "the song's title to be" → "that the song was titled"
  • Link "leaked" to Internet leak
  • Last sentence needs a citation

Composition

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Critical reception

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  • "Upon its release"
  • Link "music critics" to Music journalism
  • Hyphen in "'80s-influenced"
  • "incredible catchy" should either be "incredibly" or have [sic] written after "incredible", depending on what the source says
  • Don't need (2012) after DNA since it was introduced earlier

Chart performance

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Music video

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Background and synopsis

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  • "the group posted" → "Little Mix posted"
  • "said to an interview" → "said in an interview"
  • The whole second paragraph can and should be condensed into only a few sentences; specific allusions to certain witchy media should also be included here

Reception

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Live performances

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Cover versions

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  • Per WP:USEPROSE, this shouldn't necessarily be a bulletpoint list. I'd also like more detail on each one, particularly regarding release dates of these performances.
  • The Holly Kenyon one needs a citation

Formats and track listings

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  • Good

Personnel and credits

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Accolades

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Charts

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Certifications

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Release history

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References

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General comments

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  • Images are properly licensed and relevant
  • No stability concerns in the revision history
  • Copyvio score looks good

Apologies for taking so long, I have been inundated with work and the holiday. Putting on hold now. — GhostRiver 18:30, 29 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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