Talk:Black (2005 film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- The source for the poster links to Pinterest, a non-reliable source, so I would swap it for something else.
- That being said, the rest of the poster's non-free rationale is in excellent shape.
- I also couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
- "he meet several" → "he met several"
- "to made another" → "to make another"
- Add a comma after "written by Bhansali, Bhavani Iyer".
- "Principal photography of Black was done by Ravi K. Chandran in 100 days, from mid-January to April 2004, and took place in Shimla and Mumbai's film studio complex Film City. He used cinematography style from the 1959 film Kaagaz Ke Phool." → "Principal photography of Black was done by Ravi K. Chandran in 100 days, using the cinematography style from the 1959 film Kaagaz Ke Phool, from mid-January to April 2004, taking place in Film City, Shimla and Mumbai's film studio complex."
- "budget around" → "budget of around"
- "With a total grossing" → "With a total gross"
- Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".
- Add a comma after "Best Actor for Bachchan".
Plot and cast
[edit]- "after recovered" → "after recovering"
- "Debraj (an elderly alcoholic teacher) enters" → "Debraj, an elderly alcoholic teacher, enters"
- "when he see" → "when he sees"
- "back to be insolent" → "back to being insolent"
- I'm not sure whether Indian English uses the ending "se" or "ze", but if its the second one, change "recognise" to "recognize" and "vocalise" to "vocalize".
- "a expressive woman, and is even able to dance" → "an expressive woman who is even able to dance"
- Plot section is under 700 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
- No issues with cast.
Production
[edit]- "Hindi film ever" → "Hindi films ever"
- "he would quoted" → "he would say"
- "In an interview to" → "In an interview with"
- "inspired from" → "inspired by"
- "As a gratitude" → "As gratitude"
- "Bachchan take a hiatus" → "Bachchan took a hiatus"
- "To prepare his part" → "To prepare for his part"
- "a special training" → "special training"
- "he did an extensive research" → "he did extensive research"
- "what happen" → "what happens"
- "physical disability" → "physical disabilities"
- "an theatre actress" → "a theatre actress"
- Add a comma after "produced, financed".
- "sure for it" → "sure about it"
- "lot monochromatic" → "lot of monochromatic"
- Add a comma after "khaki".
- "between 1950s" → "between the 1950s"
- "were chose" → "were chosen"
- Remove the comma after "highest-paid actors in Bollywood".
- "film in his career" → "films in his career"
- "he shoot a film" → "he shot a film"
- "promised to collaborated" → "promised to collaborate"
- "filmed is the" → "filmed was the"
- "Mukerji stretch out her hand when snow starts to fall" → "Mukerji stretching out her hand when snow begins to fall"
- "Media reported" → "The media reported"
- "would ended" → "would end"
- "mostly of the set" → "most of the set"
- "resulting a shooting" → "resulting in a shooting"
- "for did not return 390" → "for not returning 390"
- "Deputy Chief Minister" → "the Deputy Chief Minister"
Soundtrack
[edit]- "Armenian instrument" → "the Armenian instrument"
Release
[edit]- "film had a good" → "film had good"
- "was coincided" → "coincided"
- "28 August 2009 in" → "28 August 2009 on"
- "a non-Korean films" → "a non-Korean film"
- "Black has been screened" → "Black was screened"
- "Prime Video since" → "Prime Video in"
Critical reception
[edit]- "mostly critics" → "most critics"
- Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".
Box office
[edit]- Add a comma after "the Netherlands".
Accolades
[edit]- "win the all four" → "win all four"
- Add a comma after "Best Actor".
Legacy
[edit]References
[edit]- Run this tool to archive sources.
External links
[edit]- The link to Rotten Tomatoes is unnecessary per WP:ELRC.
- Change the current link to Box Office Mojo to this.
- The "Films by Sanjay Leela Bhansali" should go on top.
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