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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 09:57, 24 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]


  • Garhwal and Tenasserim link to disambiguation pages.
  • I'd link 'coverts' to Covert feather, assuming that's what you're referring to.
  • "and the inner primaries have white tips and the base of the secondaries are covered in a small white patch" - two uses of "and the" makes this read awkwardly
  • "least concern" is in lower case in the lead though is stylised "Least Concern" in the final paragraph.

This article continues the comprehensive and well-written style I've come to expect from you. Well done. Looking forward to passing this when very minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 09:57, 24 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Freikorp: Many thanks. I've addressed your points, and will try to get to your FAC shortly. Vanamonde (talk) 11:33, 24 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Passing. :) Freikorp (talk) 11:36, 24 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]