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GA Review

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 17:06, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Hey DarklyShadows, I'll review this. LOVI33 17:06, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Cover art needs alt text
  • Are you sure the 7" cover art should be here? It is usually placed for the A-side, which I see has been done with "You Should See Me in a Crown". If you choose to keep it, it needs alt text.
  • You may want to add a music, lyric or audio video to the infobox under misc using Template:YouTube.

LOVI33 The link is not working. DarklyShadows (talk) 20:18, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thats fine, it was just a suggestion
  • "The song was later released on a 7-inch vinyl along with her single "You Should See Me in a Crown"." → "The song was released on a 7-inch vinyl as a B-Side to her single "You Should See Me in a Crown"."
  • "It was included" → "It was also included"
  • "Eilish's lyrics on the song address" → "The lyrics of "Bitches Broken Hearts" address"
  • "several topics, including the aftermath of a breakup" → "the aftermath of a breakup", no other topics are sourced

 Done

Background and release

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 Done

Composition and lyrical interpretation

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  • "described the track" → "described "Bitches Broken Hearts""
  • "According to sheet music website Musicnotes.com → "According to sheet music published at Musicnotes.com"
  • "is moderately fast at" → "has a moderately fast tempo of"
  • "vocals range between" → "vocals span one octave from"
  • Target G3 and G4 to G (musical note) respectively

 Done

Reception

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  • "received mainly positive reviews from" → "was met with generally favorable reviews from"
  • "siblings’" → "siblings'", SMOS:A&Q
  • "national charts" → "official charts"
  • "The track has notably been" → "The track has been"

 Done

Live performances

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  • Looks good!

Credits and personnel

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  • Change title to 'Personnel', 'Credits and personnel' is used when there are recording locations or publishing involved
  • "Credits adapted from the 7-inch vinyl liner notes." → "Credits adapted from liner notes of You Should See Me in a Crown / Bitches Broken Hearts." with target
  • "co-producer" → "producer" for both, I am almost certain it is credited as this because co-producers are different from producers. If it is credited like this, remove the producers from the infobox.

 Done

Certifications

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 Done

Release history

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  • Again, MOS:TABLECAPTION, maybe: Release dates and formats for "Bitches Broken Hearts"
  • "Country" → "Region"
  • "Format" → "Format(s)"
  • "Label" → "Label(s)"

 Done

References

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  • Make sure all these are archived
  • Copyvio score looks good at 31.5%
  • Ref 6: cite Depop as a publisher instead.
  • Ref 11: MOS:QWQ issues
  • Ref 16: change to cite web and wikilink YouTube to itself

Final comments and verdict

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LOVI33 That should be all. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be done! DarklyShadows (talk) 20:18, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great! Every thing looks good so thats a  Pass. Congrats! LOVI33 22:43, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]