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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:47, 7 May 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 00:47, 7 May 2018 (UTC)
- Mention Japan's involvement in the lead.
- "Nigeria has a background with satellites," Nigerian engineers and scientists?
- "Sometimes MongolSat-1 is referred to as Mongolia's first satellite, but it was launched by Bermuda-based company ABS and built by U.S. company Boeing. It was co-branded as MongolSat-1 after launch. Birds-1 successfully launched the first satellite for Bangladesh, Ghana, Mongolia, and Nigeria." [citation needed]
- "as part of the Joint Global Multi-Nation Birds Satellite project, which is a cross-border interdisciplinary satellite project for non-spacefaring countries supported by Japan" No need to mention the project twice.
- "The satellites communicate with seven ground stations: one in each of the countries participating in the Birds-1 program, and one each in Thailand and Taiwan. The satellites all use the same radio frequency." Make sure no consecutive sentences start with the same words.
- Link the countries in the Future work section.
- Dates are not consistent in the references.
- Jack Fischer's tweet ref should include his name, link to his article, and tweet inside the title of the text. Look at the {{Cite tweet}}'s example section.
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:31, 7 May 2018 (UTC)
- @Nova Crystallis: Done. Let me know if you have further comments. Kees08 (Talk) 04:37, 8 May 2018 (UTC)