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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 January 2019 and 16 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Yangbr.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 18:01, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review from Victor

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I like the skeleton of your wiki page. I think it will probably be best to omit adding a template, because that requires a bit of wiki-editing that maybe more experienced wikipedia editors can help you out with. Do you have another bacteria wikipedia page that you're trying to adapt from? Having one would be very good.

Better to rename "Discovery" to "History." There are not many recommendations to make. Once you fill out your sections more, I'll revisit this :) --VictorZzzzz (talk) 03:34, 1 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review from Carolyn

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Great structure and headings outlined for your sections- allows the reader to clearly and easily locate information. The summary box at the top indicating kingdom, phylum, order, etc. provides a nice overview of bacteria's essential classification. Good depth to each section, clearly distinguishing what separates and makes this bacteria unique from the many other species out there. One thing I would suggest overall is to possibly define some terms- I had to look up what some terms were, but good use of hyperlinks. The most important thing that the author could do would be to continue probing for more research and possibly include a section on current research (if any). Could also possibly think of a different way to split up Biology section such as possibly a new section for culture growth? Nice work though! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Carokim (talkcontribs) 17:02, 22 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]