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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Billionaire Ted/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:35, 18 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:35, 18 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Basic stuff and comments

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  • See WP:WAS for opening sentence.
  • Expand the lead to summarize the entire article.
  • "A following" doesn't sound right. reword
  • Archive sources (you can use this).
  • Do NOT use the "publisher" parameter for websites.
  • Add the "use mdy dates" template to fix references.
  • #3 is missing a date and an author name.
  • #5 and #9 appear to be dead links.

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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@Some Dude From North Carolina: I have made the adjustments you requested, except the one about "publisher". The reason is because I would just like to ask a question because if I use "Website" or "work" it puts the title in italics and my understanding was that non-print sources (like ESPN) should be in regular text. What should I used instead? The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 09:52, 21 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@The C of E: I would suggest putting PW Torch, Den of Geek, and Goliath.com in italics. Also, #3 is still missing an author/date. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:54, 21 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done those. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 14:50, 21 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]