Talk:Billiards and Snooker Control Council/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 14:31, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
- " Mr A. H. Collins-Orme" - I don't know about British English, but in American English at least, there should be a full stop after Mr. I'm not super familiar with the pecularities of BE, though.
- "John Roberts Sr" - Full stop after Sr? There's full stops after Jr. and Sr. earlier in the list
- "a staff member at The Sportsman - italicize The Sportsman, since it's the name of a publication
- "The first snooker competition organised by the BA&CC was the English Amateur Championship" - What BA&CC stands for has never been directly introduced? Well actually it is, but in the next section. Move the acronym explanation up to here
- this should have been "... the Billiards Association ..." - amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- "shot at the oject ball after a foul" - You mean object ball, right?
- Yes indeed. Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- "Loss of Control of the Professional Game" - Control isn't a proper noun, so it shouldn't be capitalized in the heading
- Decapitalized heading. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- "Leslie Driffield, a member of the BA&CC Council was present at a meeting" - Comma after Council, see MOS:HEADCAPS
- "Loss of Control of the International Amateur Game - Why are some of these words capitalized? Headings are suppose to be in sentence case, I believe
- Decapitalized heading. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- "At the beginning of the 1990s, the B&SCC was struggling financially as a result of the removal of its Sports Council funding" - It's worth mentioning why the funding was cut
- I've added the little that I could find. (No suitable results found in Newspaper databases.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:08, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- "Successor Organisations" - Organisations should be lowercase
- Ref 26 (Shamos) needs the page number
- The Google Books pages are actually from a different book to the one that is shown at the link. (The New Illustrated Encyclopedia of Billiards, not The Complete Book of Billiards.) Reference amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- Be consistent with capitalization in references. Some are in sentence case, others are in title case. Pick one and stick with it.
- Done (I think - let me know if not.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
That's all I've found. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 02:06, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking on this review, and let me know if you notice anything further. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- I've hopefully addressed your points above, Hog Farm. Let me know if anything else needs to be done. Thanks and regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:08, 26 August 2020 (UTC)