Talk:Bill Burnett (writer)

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Puffery

This article should lose the puffery and self-promotions. For instance "Burnett is currently working on new animated shows that he is furiously pitching to the plethora of new content providers ..." That's not encyclopedic. It seems more like it comes from a performer's promo pack, or a fan magazine. It would be better so stick to verifiable facts, and leave out the puffery. It's kind of pathetic. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1000:B121:CE2E:21BD:1B4D:1549:91F (talk) 20:53, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed! I removed the puffery. --Dr.bobbs (talk) 14:08, 29 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

listing friends

This article includes a paragraph (2nd to last) listing and describing the subject's friends. That isn't appropriate, is it?--Dr.bobbs (talk) 19:24, 31 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I removed it. --Dr.bobbs (talk) 14:08, 29 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]