Talk:Bezzia nobilis

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Revisions and Comments

Firstly, I want to say thank you to the primary editor of this page for the significant changes made in updating and adding new information. I have gone in and done a grammar/logic sweep, making minor changes as needed.

There is an issue in the "Predation on Other Flies" subsection, in which it is said that the fly feeds on "other flies or larvae". I think the distinction on whether these adult flies and larvae used as food sources are conspecific or from other species needs to be made clear.

Also, I think that the Introduction section is a little unfocused and could use some consolidation. If redundant information is removed, it would make for a much more concise beginning.

-RachelXinruHua (talk) 22:41, 8 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Rachel, thank you for making and suggesting edits to the page. I addressed your concerns with the "Predation on Other Flies" subsection, and shortened the introduction too. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Montana.sievert (talk • contribs) 19:10, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Montana! Very nice work with this article. I made a few changes to some hyperlinks. I added a few and removed one that seemed unnecessary. I also changed the sizes of some of the images so that they interfered with the text less. Rebeccaspell (talk) 01:57, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you to the author of this article for the revisions! I have made some minor grammatical and stylistic changes. Additionally, I also titled the images in the body of the article consistently. -RachelXinruHua (talk) 5:30, 4 December 2019 (UTC)