Talk:Between You and Me (DC Talk song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Toa Nidhiki05 (talk · contribs) 00:10, 10 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article. Toa Nidhiki05 00:10, 10 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
Prose is acceptable, but needs fixing in a few areas:

is heavily implied, although is not blatantly stated in terms of any specific religion.
should be changed to
is heavily implied, it is not blatantly stated in terms of any specific religion.
or something similar.
Interspersed is footage of a man carrying a package and running from two men.
should be changed to
Interspersed in the video is footage of a man carrying a package while running from two other men.
or something similar

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Citations are mostly fine, but SongFacts isn't a reliable source.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
All are fine, but I would suggest adding an audio sample. The sample could be a maximum of 30 seconds, as the album version is 4:59 seconds in length.
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
Overall, the article is well-done. Aside from a few minor issues, it passes criteria. However, for me to pass it I would need the issues resolved within a period of one week.

I addressed all the issues. I will try to add an audio clip later this week.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 01:27, 12 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, great job! I'll pass this article. Toa Nidhiki05