Talk:Between Five and Seven
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This article offers some interesting information, but it deviates significantly from the album style guide, and in the absence of more citations, I can't tell if some of it is original research. Text sections be moved above "list" sections, including the "track list" and "personnel." The "songs" section is a bit difficult to read as it is, and improved sourcing could help demonstrate that claims like "this song, however, appears to be several years older" are not original research. The musical personnel, interspersed through the songs, should be separated into a "personnel" section. Sourcing would be useful elsewhere, as well. For instance, who said that the album has an "impressive array of supporting musicians"? If somebody else said, it we need to attribute. If they didn't, we need to revise that to neutral text.
Lacking a list of musicians in a separate "personnel" section, this should be a "start," but it does technically have an additional section of prose, though these sections may not be substantial prose. WI:IAR makes it a "C." To reach "B", please address sourcing and layout issues and gather prose sections together to enhance readability. Thanks. Article requirements:
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