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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 08:59, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that 99 year old swimmer Betty Brussel broke three competitive swimming records on the same day?
Created by Clovermoss (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 16:10, 1 September 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: Looks good. Nice work. (And congrats on being the Wikimedian of the Year :)) BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:28, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Lead/stub comments.

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Clovermoss, MOS:NOLEAD suggests adding section headings when the article reaches 400+ words; this is less than 300 and meeting many definitions of a stub. If the body of an article is less than two not-large paragraphs long, it probably does not need a separate lead section. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:23, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I happen to disagree. I did read what that page says and by that criteria, I do not think this article applies. The very first sentence states Where the article is a stub and has no section headings, a lead may not be necessary. We have section headings and it doesn't say that you must get rid of a lead if an article is under a certain word count. I think the article is better for readers with a lead. The average person wants to know why she's important, not that she was born in Holland and has a husband. The lead summarizes these most crucial aspects of her athletic career. If you disagree with me, you can ask for a third opinion. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 16:43, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

British Columbia

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@Jengod: I appreciate you trying to make this more understandable to readers, but I described it as the "BC Senior Games" because that's what all the sources described it as and I was under the impression that this was an official name. BC Games Society uses the same naming scheme. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 11:23, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Clovermoss, don't blame Jengod, they're innocent! It was me and yep I did feel a bit iffy about that. JennyOz (talk) 11:52, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for mixing you two up. Regardless, I appreciate that you had good intentions. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 11:57, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]