Talk:Better Off Ted/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: -- Cirt (talk) 17:59, 20 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this article. -- Cirt (talk) 17:59, 20 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

There's no reviewing going on here at all. Maybe it may be better to let someone else take the review?RAIN..the..ONE ^HOTLINE 13:10, 11 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article, since it doesn't look like Cirt will get to it. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 23:36, 11 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found with the article:

"Fresco has stated that he himself doesn't like the show's title, but hasn't spoken of changing it." hadn't; make sure everything's past tense.

  *Addressed. User:AndrewAllen15

I'd prefer citations for recurring characters + ted's daughter, as they currently don't have any.

  *Added a citation for Ted's daughter. However, couldn't find sources for recurring characters, so moved them to character page. User:AndrewAllen15

"Ryan is garrulous person," is a

  *Changed to talkative. User:AndrewAllen15

There are a myriad of deadlinks; see here

  *Removed all the dead links. User:AndrewAllen15

Malcolm Barrett is a disambiguation page in the casting section.

  *Fixed the Malcolm Barrett link. User:AndrewAllen15

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. If they're not fixed within a week, the article will be failed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:49, 12 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. I have one more remaining concern after double-checking the article. The ratings table feels a bit out of place; it would fit better in the list of episodes for the series. A paragraph could then be added in the reception regarding its ratings. I'll leave this up to you but I think it would work better. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 18:59, 13 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  *I moved the ratings section to the episodes page. I'll work on making a ratings paragraph. User:AndrewAllen15

Everything checks out now. I feel like something's missing since the article is a bit on the short side for a TV series. I'll sleep on it and double-check other GAs. Only thing they seem to have that this doesn't is a section on writers, but the producer did most of that so it doesn't really apply. If I don't see anything else, I'll pass this as a GA tomorrow. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:17, 14 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see anything else needed, so I'll pass this as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:06, 14 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]