Jump to content

Talk:Betcha Gon' Know (The Prologue)/GA1

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

[edit]
GA toolbox
Reviewing

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Petergriffin9901 (talk · contribs) 22:49, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Carey revealed that she had in fact been pregnant in late 2008, and that was the reason why tour plans were cancelled. -> I think you should mention she miscarried
  • The background info is well written :P I think you should prune it down a bit. Come to think of it, it's a bit overly-detailed
  • 2009.[13]During
  • The production section reads like a list, not to mention its quite small. Aside from re-writing it somewhat, is there any other available information you can find on is production?
    Made into subsections. AARONTALK
  • Can you not find more info for the comp/lyrics?
    No. AARONTALK
  • The Reed review is a bit weird. Try re-wording or something. It doesn't express what you're trying to say very well
    Reworded. AARONTALK
  • Refs look good.

Small article, small fixes. Get to it! :P--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 23:52, 19 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]