Talk:Benvenuto di Giovanni

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Tsd14. Peer reviewers: Taylorracioppi.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 15:36, 16 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

A few ideas to improve this article:

Include more pictures
Break the "Life" section down into numerous sections (early life, career, late life, family, etc.)
Utilize more sources
Give far greater detail to the information that is already there
Reword some of the sentences to ensure clarity
Make the "lead section" longer

Tsd14 (talk) 07:52, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Working Bibliography

Coté, Cynthia. "Benvenuto di Giovanni." Grove Art Online. Oxford Art Online. Oxford University Press, accessed February 21, 2017, http://www.oxfordartonline.com/subscriber/article/grove/art/T008000.

(this source has already been cited in the article, but it still has much more relevant information that I can draw from)

Thomas N. Maytham. "An Expulsion from Paradise by Benvenuto Di Giovanni." Bulletin of the Museum of Fine Arts 55, no. 300 (1957): 44-46. http://www.jstor.org/stable/4171262.
"BENVENUTO DI GIOVANNI DI MEO DEL GUASTA." Benezit Dictionary of Artists. Oxford Art Online. Oxford University Press, accessed February 21, 2017, http://www.oxfordartonline.com/subscriber/article/benezit/B00016696.
ARTstor (specific links to follow) (source for some of Benvenuto di Giovanni's works)
Benvenuto di Giovanni, Girolamo di Benvenuto: their altarpieces in the J. Paul Getty Museum. And a summary catalogue of their paintings in America (book by Burton B. Fredericksen and Darrell D. Davisson)

I plan on having more sources, but this is what I have compiled so far. Tsd14 (talk) 17:26, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review and Copy Edit

Hi Tsd14, here is my review of your article:

Lead Section: I think that your lead section is very strong. It concisely highlights who this person was, it answers: who, what, when,... I would maybe include a brief 'where' sentence in the lead, something more specific than just Italy.

Sensible Structure: Your article has a clearly defined structure based on the contents box. I think the current structure is logical, but as you add more information I would add more subcategories, similar to how you have sub headings for works that you expand on.

Neutral Content: Your content is encyclopedic and overall neutral, which is required for a wiki article.

Reliable Sources: The one thing I did notice is that your references section does not match with the in-text citations. For example, in-text citations are numerical but when you scroll down to your reference section, they are alphabetical. Thus, I am unable to distinguish which in-text citation corresponds to which reference.

Overall, I think your article is well written. I did not catch any glaring spelling or grammar mistakes. I think that you could definitely include more pictures to spice up the page's visual components. ArtStor is a great place to get copyright-free images. I liked the incorporation of the table because it presents information in a very clear way. This is something I might consider adding to my own article.

Hope this helps! Taylorracioppi (talk) 03:33, 6 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your help! I really appreciate it and made sure to utilize your advice as I finished up my article!Tsd14 (talk) 01:54, 20 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]