Talk:Ben Edwards (American football)

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Review: November 16, 2017. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:11, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Going to take the time to review this entry. MWright96 (talk) 09:11, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Early years

"Bay Rivers District his junior year in 2008." - Bay River District during his junior year in 2008 Done
"He sat out the second half of his senior season due to an injury." - do we know what type of injury Edwards suffered?

@MWright96: Guess we didn't do this. The source that said he missed the second half of the season was misleading. I can only find proof of him missing two games and he also played in the playoffs. I altered the text. Thoughts? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:58, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Yes it looks good enough. Only point that I make is the way you have added the work in the three new references. You should be consistent in how you present them throughout the article. MWright96 (talk) 07:55, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"He averaged 14.0 points and 5.4 assists per game his junior year," - Edwards averaged 14.0 points and 5.4 assists per game in his junior year Done

College career

"He played in ten games, starting five, his freshman season in 2010," - He played in ten games, starting ten of them, throughout his freshman season in 2010, Done
Wikilink touchdown the first time it is mentioned Done
"He appeared in eleven games, starting ten, in 2011, recording 44 receptions for 509 yards and six touchdowns. Edwards earned CAA All-Academic accolades in 2011." - reword these two sentences to read In 2011, Edwards appeared in eleven games, of which he started ten, recording 44 receptions for 509 yards and six touchdowns. He earned CAA All-Academic accolades the same year. Done
"Edwards rushed for 117 yards on sixteen attempts in 2012 as well." - that same year Done
Would suggest that you spell out ACL or wikilink it Done

Professional career

Hyphenate "three day" Done
Be consistent on whether you hypenate "minicamp" or not Done
"He reverted to injured reserve on May 10, 2016." - He reverted to injured reserve the following day Done

Personal life

"Aaron, played quarterback" - played as a quarterback Done

On hold until these copy-edits have been made. Feel free to discuss if you differ. MWright96 (talk) 08:53, 15 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Now you have addressed all the queries that have been made, I can now close the review and promote this to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:00, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]