Talk:Bellevue City Hall/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:11, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

• Lead is a little brief, in particular the second para, I don't think two sentences is really a paragraph...
  • Y Expanded both paragraphs a bit.
• You could create 450 Bell Terrace as a redirect if it really was a former name.
  • Y Done.
• "incorporation" is piped to a redirect.
  • Y Fixed.
• Shades of overlinking, e.g. "schoolhouse", "hardware store", "air conditioning", "basketball", "car dealership" etc...
  • Y Fixed.
• 11 floors in the infobox but as far as I can tell, only 9 stories mentioned in the prose. Did the renovation add two more floors?
  • Y Fixed, it's actually seven floors, which were reduced from the original nine in the Qwest configuration.
• "a "hub of civic life"" quote needs ref/attribution.
  • Y Added.
• EnergyStar is simply Energy Star.
  • Y Fixed.
• Could find an appropriate sub-cat of Category:Buildings and structures by year of completion.
  • Y Added.

Otherwise not much more to add, a nice piece of work. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:27, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: I believe that addresses everything in your review. SounderBruce 23:35, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Good work, it was very close before your modifications, and I've now passed it. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:32, 16 August 2017 (UTC)