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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:59, 1 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Going to be reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 19:59, 1 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Early life and background

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Junior career

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  • "the first of which coming while she was still 14 years old." - at aged 14.
  • "Bencic became the first to win the girls' singles titles" - first player
  • "She was also the first Swiss girl to win a junior Grand Slam singles title since Martina Hingis in 1994," - try; She was also the first Swiss girl since Martina Hingis in 1994 to win a junior Grand Slam singles title.
  • "who won the same two titles that year." - I believe this section of text is redundant as the article is about Bencic and not concerning Hingis
    • I left it because it's natural for the reader to want to know which title(s) Hingis had won.
  • "Bencic's win streak was ended" - Bencic's run of victories

2011–14: Newcomer of the Year, US Open quarterfinal at 17

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2015: Maiden WTA title, Premier 5 title, world No. 12

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  • "She qualified for the WTA Elite Trophy, the second-tier year-end championship, but withdrew due to injury." - Was this because of Bencic's leg and hand injuries as mentioned in the previous sentence? If so than it will be to be added for clarity

2016–17: Top 10 debut, injury layoffs

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2018–19: Slow ascent back into top 20, end of WTA title drought

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  • "For the third consecutive year, Bencic was forced to miss a few consecutive months due to injury, this time because of a stress fracture in her foot. This injury kept her out from mid-March to late May." - I believe that these sentences could be more concise. How about A stress fracture in Bencic's foot sidelined her from mid-March to late May 2018.?
    • Changed to "For the third consecutive year, Bencic was forced to miss a few consecutive months due to injury. A stress fracture in her foot sidelined her from mid-March to late May." Sportsfan77777 (talk) 08:56, 3 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The title helped her rise from No. 45 all the way to No. 23 in the world." - rise from No. 45 to world No. 23.
  • "Bencic produced another Premier Mandatory semifinal at the Bencic produced another Premier Mandatory semifinal at the Madrid Open." - I feel that there is a chunk of information missing from this sentence and the structure of the sentence could do with a rework.

Fed Cup

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Hopman Cup

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Playing style

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References

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The review will be put on hold until the nominator has adequately addressed the issues raised above. MWright96 (talk) 07:48, 3 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again, MWright96! I addressed everything above. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 20:37, 3 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Sportsfan77777: Am satisfied that the changes made to the article are adequate and will now be promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 13:51, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]