Talk:Belgium at the 1998 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:51, 16 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Sadly, no, I expect such information has been lost to time, and may be a problem for all Nagano articles going forward. Courcelles (talk) 14:19, 16 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Add links in the prose to the individal events that Veldkamp competed in
"and would go on to represent Belgium at the 2002 Winter Olympics and 2006 Winter Olympics." - reword toand the 2006 Winter Olympics.
"He went out early and set a new world record" - link world record to List of world records in speed skating
"only to two more world records set that day," - change to only for two more world records to be set that day,
"he took part in the 1,500 metres," - how about participated for some variety?
"and finished with a time of 13 minutes and 29 seconds," - finished fourth

That is my lot. This article will be put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 10:34, 16 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Everything either fixed or responded to. Thanks for the review, MWright96. Courcelles (talk) 14:21, 16 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Courcelles: Great. Can now promote this article to GA class. I'll overlook the flag bearer for the closing ceremony point since that info cannot be found. MWright96 (talk) 18:38, 16 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]