Talk:Behold a Pale Horse (film)

Upgrading the Article

ok, I've got the cast section and what should be sufficient categories. I'll try to work on the rest. Murderbike 01:26, 26 January 2007 (UTC)

Images

Anybody else want to try to help save the whales? I am trying, feel free to help. !~ WikiDon 00:39, 6 November 2007 (UTC)

Fair use rationale for Image:Behold a Pale Horse cover.jpg

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Fair use rationale for Image:Behold A Pale Horse.jpg

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BetacommandBot 22:58, 29 October 2007 (UTC)

Fair use rationale for Image:Behold pale horse score.jpg

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BetacommandBot 23:00, 29 October 2007 (UTC)

Fair use rationale for Image:Behold A Pale Horse.jpg

Image:Behold A Pale Horse.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.

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BetacommandBot 10:02, 5 November 2007 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Behold a Pale Horse (film)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

This article has failed its GA nomination. Issues include:

• The lead is insufficient, as evidenced by the cleanup banner at the top. See WP:LEAD and remember that the lead must be an overview of the entire article.
• The prose does not yet meet the "well-written" standard. Examples:
  • "Behold a Pale Horse is a 1964 film directed by Fred Zinnemann, based on the novel Killing a Mouse on Sunday by Emeric Pressburger, which itself is loosely based on the life of the Spanish anarchist guerrilla, Francisco Sabaté Llopart‎." A rather long sentence, and it has unnecessary commas.
  • "The film is the story of a Catalan guerrilla exiled in France after the Spanish Civil War returning to Catalonia to visit his mother." Very choppy and initally confusing; it almost sounded like the "Spanish Civil War" returned to Catalonia.
  • "Opening on shots from the Spanish Civil War, and a line of Spanish refugees crossing the border into France after defeat by the Francoists, Manuel Artiguez turns away from the border and back towards Spain." Should be, "The movie opens..."
  • "However, once inside the hospital, he kills a few officers, but is finally shot himself. "
• Inline citations should be consistently formatted. Web citations should have publishers and last access dates in addition to URLs and title.s
• "One of the film's stars, Omar Sharif, went so far as to refer to it as a "bad film" by a "good director".[12]" The tone of "went so far" is not very encyclopedic.
• The stubby paragraphs should be merged, and the "Home video release history" should probably be integrated into the previous section.
• File:Behold pale horse score.jpg – the fair use rationale is weak and does not explain why the image adds to the article.
• The "Score" section is stubby and needs more references.
• Are you sure that you have exhausted all available sources? A simple Google Book reveals this. Dabomb87 (talk) 01:49, 7 January 2009 (UTC)