Talk:Bebe (Inna and Vinka song)

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January 6, 2020	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bebe (Inna and Vinka song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 16:42, 2 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Will get to this shortly. --Kyle Peake (talk) 16:42, 2 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Embed the music video in the infobox as it is on Inna's YouTube
"by Global Records on 4 November 2019" → "on 4 November 2019 by Global Records"
"while production was handled" → "while the production was handled"
"Luganda and English love" → "Luganda, and English love" to avoid any sort of confusion to do with the two languages
""Bebe"'s genre was described" → "the track's genre has been described"
Target music critics to the more relevant Music journalism
"criticizing it as sonically" → "criticizing the track as sonically"
"official YouTube channel simultaneously with the song's digital release" → "YouTube channel on 4 November 2019, simultaneously with the track's digital release" as it should only be mentioned with the word official in the body as this is overdoing for the lead and the release date of the single was said as long ago as the last para

I left out the release date. Stating that the release was simulataneous with the digital premiere is enough for the lead.

"were praised by reviewers" → "were praised by critics"
""Bebe" experienced success" → "the track experienced success"

Background and composition

"while production was handled" → "while the production was handled"
"released for digital download" → "released for digital download in various countries"
"Luganda and English" → "Luganda, and English"
"during a spontaneous studio session leading" either write "...session, leading" or "...session that lead to" depending on whether or not the created content came after of the session or during it for the former and latter, respectively

The concept of the song and etc came with the session. I chose the first option.

"commentary noted it" → "commentary noted the track"

Reception

"was received with"
Target music critics to Music journalism
Add the editor's name
WikiLink Radio France International to Radio France Internationale
"praised the singers' vocals" → "praised Inna's vocals"

I left it like that since they praised both Inna and Vinka's vocals.

"as "relatively banal [...] The" → "as "relatively banal" and wrote that "The"
"Almost boring,"" → "Almost boring"," for consistency
"Commercially, "Bebe" achieved" → "Commercially, the track achieved"
"on 22 December 2019" → "for the issue date of 22 December 2019"

Music video

Include alt text for img and remove the ref from it because that is sourced elsewhere
Target director of photographer to Cinematographer
"incorporated in one scene" → "incorporated in one scene of the video"
"the video opens with" → "the music video opens with" as it's a new para
"inside of the carriage" → "interior of the carriage"
"it sees Inna" → "the video sees Inna"

"it" refers to the interior of the carriage. It has Inna in it, that's why I wrote it like that.

Is "sporting" encyclopedic?

I guess so. I've been using it on a lot of other articles as an alternative to "wear", as well as seen it a lot here.

"and the latter" → "while the latter wears"
Refs 5 and 4 should be in numerical order
"was praised by reviewers" → "was praised by critics"
"called it one" → "called the clip"

Credits and personnel

Good

Track listing

Good

Charts

Good

Release history

Good

References

Archive all with fix dead links
Change iTunes Store to being a publisher
Target Radio France International to Radio France Internationale
Change Media Forest to being a publisher
Change Click to Click! with target

Overall

On hold for now, great work though!

@Kyle Peake: Hi! Thank you very much for the review, I've done everything you suggested, except where commented on. Greets and happy new year!! Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:01, 6 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: Well done and happy new year, great to hear from you again and to ✓ Pass this! --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:05, 6 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]