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January 11, 2013	Good article nominee	Listed

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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 22:43, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

No Issues. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

since its inception. ---> I find this kind of vague, why it's just can't be release? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Well, the song was performed on tour before it was actually released. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 01:16, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Alright then. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:14, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Development

MTV News should not be italicized — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The song was ~~finally~~ mastered by Joe Gastwirt. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done — Statυs (talk, contribs) 01:16, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Composition

It carries ---> How about it contains? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
An "overcompensating" guitar strums at a "feverish pace" throughout the song. ---> Maybe merge it with the previous sentence, because it's kind of odd on itself. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Euro pop ---> europop. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
In the chorus, she says ---> she sings i guess? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
she speaks ---> Again sings or some synonym. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All done, with the exception of Euro pop, as it is from a quote. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:06, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Critical response

Suggestion: maybe have Reception as main section and critical and commercial as subsections? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Rest looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Commercial performance

Looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

Good job. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

Good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Formats and track listings

Good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

There's WP:OVERLINK, unlink please. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:06, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

Looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

References

Ref. 13. misses publisher — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 16. doesn't have accessdate — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Refs. 17, 18, 19, same, missing accessdate — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 23. some linking please. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 25. MTV ---> MTV News. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 26. wrong formatting. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 28. misses publisher. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
When you link ref 23, unlink 34 — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done I believe all of this has been resolved. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:06, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Okay passing this now. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 22:02, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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