Talk:Battle of Yanshi/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:13, 6 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:13, 6 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs, external links OK.
Image properly licensed.
by the general Yuwen Huaji, in May 618 move the comma after 618
Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:49, 11 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cplakidas: Where are we on this?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:25, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: thanks for the heads up, I had totally forgotten about it :). Regarding "by the general Yuwen Huaji, in May 618", I've rephrased it to make it clearer. Is there really nothing else? Cheers, Constantine ✍ 07:43, 30 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

the canal, and already before dawn his army crossed over and deployed the word "already" and the comma seem rather pointless here.

Oh, and make sure that all of your titles are in title case.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:05, 30 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Prose fixed. Re the titles, I assume you mean the chapter headings. These are actually written so in the original, cf. [1]. Cheers, Constantine ✍ 15:54, 30 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Chapter titles or not, they should be consistent with book titles.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:26, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Constantine ✍ 14:13, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]