Talk:Battle of Osan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jackyd101 (talk) 09:29, 30 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, I was going to do a peer review, but then I saw this was at GA and decided to direct my comments there. I am happy to tell you that this article has passed GA without the need for any further improvement. Listed below is information on how the article fared against the Wikipedia:good article criteria, with suggestions for future development. These are not required to achieve GA standard, but they might help in future A-class or FAC review process.

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):

"direct hits on the lead tanks, but did not damage the tanks." - repetition of tanks here that needs to be rephrased.
"Howitzer" is capitalised throughout, is this intentional.

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
It is stable.
It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b (lack of images does not in itself exclude GA): c (non-free images have fair use rationales):

It would be nice to have a lead image, perhaps a map locating Osan on the Korean peninsula? On the same note, are co-ordinates available for the battle?

Overall:
a Pass/Fail:

Thankyou and congratulations, an excellent addition to Wikipedia:Good Articles. All the best.--Jackyd101 (talk) 09:29, 30 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]