Talk:Battle of Mykonos/GA1
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 15:15, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 15:15, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox;
- fought in the main harbour; I am not sure about "in the" or "at the"
- in is correct here
- A
BritishRoyal Navy; redundant phrase, Royal Navy itself indicates that it belongs to British
- A
- Although the link does go to Royal Navy, technically every navy in Europe at the time was a "Royal Navy" except the French (which had been until 1789). I was advised many years ago to clarify this for non-English readers (from say, the Netherlands or Norway), who might be confused.
- when the "Hébé-class" French frigate Sibylle
- Done
- May I know why "Jacques-Mélanie Rondeau" was red-linked; because a very very few "Commodores" are notable
- Actually almost all captains, let alone commodores, serving at this stage of the war went on to have very notable careers and most have articles - Rondeau here is the exception rather than the rule. I'll delink if you insist, but he's likely to get one at some stage
- in 1799 participated -> in 1799, it participated; not able get the flow
- Done
- Section 1;
- French Mediterranean Fleet anchored in the harbour; which harbour?
- Toulon harbour, as the sentence says.
- Section 2;
- In this table, "Guns" refers to all cannon carried by the ship; I think it should be "cannons"
- Afraid not, the plural of "cannon" is "cannon". English is dumb sometimes.
- Section 3;
- opinion of "British" naval historian William James
- Done
- 3.2% confidence, violation unlikely.
- Well written. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 14:35, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, see comments above.--Jackyd101 (talk) 14:50, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 10:49, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: