Talk:Battle of Galveston Harbor (1862)/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:47, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:47, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links OK
- Images appropriately licensed
- In "the" shoreline
- Corrected
- Part of the Confederate coastline was within the state of Texas, and the most significant port at that time was Galveston. Awkward
- Rephrased, is this better?
- more bases for Union ships and fewer bases for blockade runners. proximity alert for "bases"
- Dropped the second one
- What kind of ships did Renshaw have?
- Done. Thank goodness for DANFS.
- continue to fire would be bad political optics Suggest "against the laws of war"
- Done
- Short but sweet--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:00, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: - Are my changes satisfactory? Hog Farm Talk 05:01, 28 May 2021 (UTC)