Talk:Battle of Fort Lahtzanit/GA1
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Reviewer: —Ed!(talk) 03:33, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written:
- Comments
- The lead should be expanded to give a little context. Make it a few paras and talk a little about which war, which country, etc. Right now it is very brief.
- Whose plan is Operation Badr? What does it say? The article should be self-sustaining, ie all the context for what is going on should be here without having to click another link.
- The article is short on links. See if articles exist for any of the towns, military units, etc. in the article.
- "...between an area two kilometers south and one-and-a-half kilometers north of the fort." - these measurements need convert templates.
- "Abassi was reinforced with a Sa'iqa company (lit. lightening; Egyptians commandos)" - link to company (military unit) and commando here. Military jargain tends to be lost on the average reader.
- The references aren't consistent. The proper format for them is "Name year, page."
- It is factually accurate and verifiable:
- Pass no problems there
- It is broad in its coverage:
- Pass it needs a little more context to explain which war and what was happening in the area around this battle, etc.
- It follows the neutral point of view policy:
- Comments
- 'Isolation' section: "They succeeded in attracting enemy fire," - avoid the use of the term "enemy" to keep the article neutral
- It is stable:
- Pass No problems there.
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
- Pass An infobox is in use.
- Overall:
- On Hold for just a few comments before it passes. —Ed!(talk) 05:57, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for making this review! All comments/issues have been addressed I believe. Let me know if there's something else to be done. --Sherif9282 (talk) 11:38, 3 December 2010 (UTC)